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Script Coverage - Star Wars

“Star Wars” Screenwriter: George Lucas Page count: 127pgs Genre: Science Fiction Draft date: November 29, 1974 Logline:  After discovering that his father was a legendary warrior, a farm boy becomes entangled in an intergalactic civil war. Comments:  STAR WARS is a fairly conventional story that isn’t quite unique enough to stand out from the other sci-fi properties.  It’s nothing more than the classic Hero’s Journey set against the backdrop of outer space.  The writer’s feeble attempt at world building merely consists of name-dropping extraneous alien species, spacecraft and weapons .   There is no real substance or original ideas   in STAR WARS, leading to a decent if forgettable read. PLOT While the act structure is serviceable and hits the requisite beats, the plot is fairly standard, going from station to station (sometimes literally).  After a text-heavy exposition dump at the top, we move into an alien world featuring a merciless empire, a rogue rebellio